The House – An Excerpt from my Novel
The House
The house unchanged was just as she’d remembered. To see the house was good, it had always been a haven. It was a place of freedom, of learning, and safe keeping. A place for hiding, for biding time, for secrets.
It held its back to the mountain as if set into its walls, and standing at the front door you could see the twinkling lights of town, about ten miles down a sweep of clotted fields. As a child she thought the house was in the sky, and her aunt, borrowing from Tennyson would say…
‘She clasps the crag with crooked hands; Close to the sun in lonely lands, ring’d with the azure world, she stands. The wrinkled road beneath her crawls; she watches from her mountain walls, And like a thunderbolt she falls.’
To the outside world it was a house of mystery, of witches, and a curious air of foreboding, with its steep steps up to the door. They didn’t invite the visitor.
Life was hard here, but inside unfolded many warm comforts and surprising delights. It had to serve many purposes beyond that of a normal house. For generations it had kept its people safe within its walls, while keeping dangers out…
ENDS
This is an excerpt from the first draft of my first novel, not yet published. I hope you liked it. Keep up to date with my progress here on the blog. I love to hear your thoughts so feel free to comment. Thanks for reading 🙂
Oooh, I want to hear more!!!!
There is no more : ) Thanks Emily
Intriguing, which is exactly what flash fiction should be, I think. I can see the house in my mind’s eye and I already hate the town….Bring on part two!
Intriguing is good thanks Joanna : )
Leaves you with more questions than answers! A great wee read. Can already picture all it’s quirky, dark secrets beyond that brooding doorway!
Great fun, thanks for that!
Thank you Kerry, I do hope your’re not disappointed as much as you like dark things to not have those secrets revealed 🙂
There’s nothing sadder than a revealed secret! So, no! 😉
Love it 🙂
Delighted to hear that Avril and really appreciate you letting me know, thank you : )
Oh I love it!! its soooo descriptive I think my favourite bit is when you say that even those who know it would find it hard to place what was behind the windows. I want to go to that house because in my minds eye Im already standing at the bottom of the steps…….