Adventures in Novel Writing - The Next Phase - Submissions

Last week I entered a new phase in the journey of the book. I’m entering a competition for unpublished writers, the closing date is this Friday the 30th of January and the prize is an offer of representation with major literary agency, Janklow & Nesbit in association with Mumsnet.

On the 23 February, they’ll announce six finalists. The winner will be announced on Monday 16 March. To enter you have to send 8000 words and a 500 word outline or synopsis of the remaining chapters.

So far so great right?

I didn’t think any of this was going to be a problem but of course, I was wrong. The 8000 words, NO problem, but the synopsis… impossible.

I couldn’t work out why I was struggling but then I came across this quote by ‘Game of Thrones’ writer George RR Martin…

gardeners

Lightbulb! I’m a gardener.

Suddenly it all made sense. I didn’t plan/outline my novel before I began or at any time which makes it more difficult, but guess what?

I have to do it now.

The synopsis, apparently, is the dread of most writers, phew, ok. Misery loves company and yes after my research I did feel better.

Google led me to some helpful if, still daunting guidelines see HERE and HERE. I decided to go with the simpler one as a starting point.

munch

Woman with Peonies Edvard Munch - 1926

BUT, insert sob, there’s nothing simple about any of this and I quickly met my next problem.

My novel is a multi-point of view story with more than one main character. How to get that across in 500 compelling words? HOW?

To cut a long story short I went with the guidelines HERE

Can you picture my head? It took me to Sunday to finish but now that’s done I have to say this has been a game changing experience. I can now view my story in microcosm, and it’s good, it’s really good. I’ve been forced to focus, think harder, question, explain, make some changes, slash even, and tighten.

And again I’ve learned I can do the hard things, the hardest, keep you awake at night, seem impossible things. Always a good feeling, one to remind yourself of at the next hurdle.

in the garden

In the Garden by Robert Falk

So this will be the first of countless submissions to agents and/or competitions and I’m going to share every rejection, pitfall and success. Won’t that be fun!

My only reservation is I don’t want you to feel sorry for me over rejections because honestly I won’t. The rejections mean only what I can learn from them. I’ve a big picture in mind, so don’t worry! I just wanted to say that because your’re such a supportive bunch : )

Rest assured I’ll be doing whatever needs to be done, I’ll be working and it will be enough.

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10 Responses to Adventures in Novel Writing - The Next Phase - Submissions

  1. Mary Arena

    At a sales meeting years ago, by way of motivation, a sales manager told us ” just remember, the more sh.. you throw against the wall the closer you’ll be to making a sale”. So, as those expected rejections show up just click your heels and believe. Peace!

     
    • Jane

      Thank you Mary : )

       
  2. Mary Holahan

    The writer Paul Howard in the Irish Times on the 6th of January had a list of 44 things for each of his 44 years and point 5 was that “In January 1962, Decca Records turned down the Beatles in favour of Brian Poole and the Tremeloes. That is all anyone needs to know about rejection.
    Best of luck Jane :-)

     
    • Jane

      Who???!!! : ) That is brilliant Mary, just perfect, thank you : )

       
  3. Emily

    I’m so enjoying this journey. It will be great, just GREAT, and I would not be at all surprised if you easily sailed through. WELL DONE!!

     
    • Jane

      Thanks Emily, in the hands of the gods now : )

       
  4. Shalagh Hogan

    You have done so much more than I’d have allowed myself to even dream of doing, the rest is whipped topping. Good luck!!!! And congratulations on doing the hard work.
    Love,
    Shalagh

     
    • Jane

      That is so sweet Shalagh, thank you for those lovely words. Warmed the cockles of my heart : )

       
  5. Joanna

    Very exciting! Good luck! I’d say there will be a lot of people entering that competition who will write something for it as opposed to having something ready that has been worked on and edited already, you mightn’t be starting the rejection process at all. Fingers crossed!

     
    • Jane

      Can you imagine it?!!! There’d be a good chance I’d die of excitement but what a way to go : ) Thanks Joanna, it’s all very exciting.

       

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